App Store listing
Slack
SLACK TECHNOLOGIES L.L.C. · Business
Enterprise messaging for teams who still need AI to find yesterday's email.
- promise14/20
- subtitle9/20
- screenshots15/20
- proof0/20
- first line13/20
Wins installs
- Opens with the user's outcome, not the product."Companies...grow their business in Slack because it gets busywork off their plates" is about their problem solved, not Slack's features.
- Screenshots show the moment of value, not just UI.Screenshot 2 shows "Organise your conversations" with actual unread messages and channels—the moment someone lands in Slack and finds what they need.
- Specific integrations named, not vague features."Connect to 2,600+ apps" and "Google Drive, Dropbox, Asana, Zapier, Figma, Zendesk" gives scroller proof this actually plugs into their world.
Loses installs
- No proof at all: rating buried, no customer quotes.4.1 stars shown in metadata but never mentioned in copy. No named users, case studies, or numbers that show Slack's scale or success—just feature lists.Fix Add one sentence: "Trusted by 750,000+ teams" or pull a real customer quote into the opening.
- Subtitle is generic feature list, not a benefit."All your people, apps and messages in one place" is what every chat app claims—could be Discord, Teams, or Telegram. No specificity to Slack.Fix Replace with: "Slack: Get work done without the meetings" or "Cut email, keep collaboration."
- AI features hidden behind asterisks and upsells."Summarize conversations to catch you up with a click" and AI search are buried in the description and marked "Requires Slack AI add-on"—scroller sees blockers, not value.Fix Lead with AI value in a standalone bullet: "AI finds info in seconds—no digging through 10,000 messages."